Before

Please give consideration to joining the Projects Committee.

After

Please consider joining the Projects Committee.

Before

The necessary requirements are not the same.

After

The requirements are different.

Before

By undertaking a study of pollution we can demonstrate it is detrimental to the environment.

After

By studying pollution we can prove it is harmful to the environment.

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We would like to take this opportunity to thank you for your assistance on the farm.

After

Thank you for your help on the farm.